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开篇:写作不仅是一种记录,更是一种创造,它让我们能够捕捉那些稍纵即逝的灵感,将它们永久地定格在纸上。下面是小编精心整理的12篇我喜欢的小动物作文,希望这些内容能成为您创作过程中的良师益友,陪伴您不断探索和进步。
在家里有两只小兔子,它是去年妈妈在集市上买的。这两只兔子一只叫乖乖,一只叫怪怪。这两只兔子既活泼又可爱给我们家带来了欢声笑语。
乖乖浑身的毛黑白相间,像一个大绒球。它的头上有一双又细又长的耳朵,只要有一点动静他都听地一清二楚。圆圆的脸上嵌着一双红宝石似的眼睛闪闪发光。它有一个圆圆的鼻子,下面有一个三瓣嘴。它的四肢又短又粗,走起路来一蹦一跳。它的尾巴圆圆的,像一个小绒球。
有一次,我拿起一个红彤彤的萝卜,放在小兔子头上逗它玩。只见它立刻叼起萝卜,把它按在地上,用那灵敏的鼻子闻一闻,然后围着萝卜条一圈,舔一舔觉得那是一个真萝卜,然后露出一排大白牙津津有味地吃着。最后懒懒地跳上沙发好像在说:“啊!我吃饱了,要去睡觉了。”
过了一段时间,我发现每次给这两只可爱的乖乖怪怪喂食时笨笨总是把萝卜给怪怪吃,只见怪怪的肚子圆圆的垂了下来,而乖乖却骨瘦如柴。近些日子,乖乖总是这样。没过多久兔子的睡房里有几只小兔子,这时我才明白,原来以前怪怪要生宝宝,乖乖主动把自己的食物让给它,这是一只多么慈爱的兔子呀!
可是它们又是一对天敌,几乎每天都要打上一架心里才舒服似的。有一次它们又在打架,我连忙在它们身旁跺一下脚,只见它们立刻逃往柜子下面。乖乖探出它的小脑袋看一看是什么情况,它一看外面什么都没有生气地跳出来,似乎在责备自己为什么这么胆小!
这两只顽皮的小兔子真是生气勃勃,天真可爱啊,我不得不赞扬它们啊!
贵屹镇新乡小学14 郭晓纯
我喜欢的一种小动物正是在那次着名的田径比赛中,由于它的坚持和不懈最终获得了第一名,不用说它就是——乌龟。
我不光喜欢乌龟在比赛中奋力拼搏的精神,更喜欢它在生活中的聪明。在我身边有这样一个真实的故事:有一次,我去姑姑家玩,一进门就听到姑姑说:“快来看那!”原来,由于姑姑没有买到合适的鱼缸所以把一大一小两只乌龟放在了一个盛满清水和放了一块石头的盆子里,小乌龟爬到大乌龟身上从盆子里跑了出来,而大乌龟则利用石头也趴了出来。这时我的心头怦然一震:小小的乌龟竟然对自由充满了无限渴望,于是我们把这两只乌龟送回了嘉陵江。
龟的寿命究竟有多长?目前尚无定论。一般讲能活100年,据有关考证也有300年以上的,甚至有过千年,所以乌龟也叫做长寿龟。乌龟是水陆两栖性动物,和牛羊一样是用肺呼吸,乌龟是卵生的,它通常会在晚上爬上沙滩,找个好位置挖洞,并把蛋放入洞里,埋好。
小乌龟有一身褐色的皮肤,头颈上条条黄色的花纹隐约可见。三角形的大脑袋上,又宽又大的嘴紧闭着。小而有神的灰眼睛好奇地打量着周围的世界。浅黄色的眼皮一张一翕,可爱极了。那深褐色的“盔甲”,被几条细细的纹路分割成一块块有规则的六角形,每个六角形的内部,又有一个个整齐地排列着的更小的六角形。就像树的年轮,有几圈,它就有几岁。
我喜欢小乌龟,因为它的有许多耐人寻味的趣事给我带来了欢乐,我从它身上体会到了生活的情趣和生命的活力。
四川省南充市顺庆区西华师大附小五年级:杨健鹏
作文 zuowenku.net
我一向喜欢小动物,尤其是鹦鹉,因为他们时刻都生机勃勃,叫声清脆。
我家的鹦鹉是我给起的名字,一只叫蹦蹦,一只叫跳跳。他们身上的羽毛黄黑相间,非常漂亮。他们都有一双又黑又亮的眼睛,像小衣钩似的嘴,两个鼻子像小芝麻粒粘在嘴的上方。它们的小肚皮一鼓一缩,深绿与浅绿交织在一起,真好看。两只鹦鹉最大的区别就在尾巴上了,蹦蹦哟一条和自己身体一样长的尾巴,而跳跳的尾巴就没有那么长了。
几天前,我把鹦鹉放在花丛中间,谁知刚进去,它们就咔叽咔叽地“修理”起花草来了,把我精心培育的花弄得枝折花落,还把吊兰“修理”得整整齐齐,真可以叫它们勤勤恳恳的“园丁”了。
那天我们出远门回家,发现小鸟没有小米吃了,便喂了它们一些小米,等我洗手回来,发现它们正高高兴兴地吃着,我就蹲在鸟笼旁边看。它们的吃相没有鹅那么高傲,而是大大方方,像小姑娘一样。它们一粒一粒地吃,吃一粒就抬一次头,我真怕它们得了脑震荡。
我家的鹦鹉真是又让我高兴,又让我担忧。
北京海淀区中关村三小五年级:徐瑷桐
我喜欢的小动物---蚕宝宝
我喜欢蚕宝宝。因为蚕宝宝浑身都是宝,它褪下来的皮能入药。吐出的丝能做衣服,排出的便便能做枕芯,它也很可爱。
它头上的眼睛、鼻子、嘴都很微小,嘴上有两片像剪刀一样的牙齿,吃桑叶的时候,它会找到叶子的边然后顺着一头吃下去,发出沙沙的声音。吃了几天桑叶后,就躺在蚕床上褪皮,这样褪四次皮后开始吐丝结茧子,再过几天,茧子开了,蚕宝宝变成了蛾子产卵,卵像小米粒一样,刚开始是黄黄的,慢慢变成黑黑的。
你们喜欢蚕宝宝吗?
英语作文一:我最喜欢的小动物
Rabbit is an cute kind of amimals.It has two long ears.They can make rabbits hear carefully.It also has a short tail,which makes rabbits so lovely.Rabbits likes eating carrots.If you feel lonely.You can keep a rabbit.It can be your good friend.
兔子是一种机灵的动物,它有两个长耳朵,它们可以让兔子清楚地倾听。兔子还有一个短尾巴,让兔子更可爱。兔子喜欢吃胡萝卜,如果你感到孤独,你可以养一只兔子,它会成为你的朋友。
英语作文二:我最喜欢的小动物
I like the small animal is a puppy, it whole body covered with a white hair, like a regiment cotton candy; The eyes are the YuanLiuLiu, like two gem; Ear is a semicircle, nose is black, short tail, very lovely.
I give it to love to eat, it will be the bones of a piece of a piece, a short for a short to chew. It finished eating bones, will call a few barks
Sound, as if to say: "small host, thank you." Whenever I go to school, she will always give me a journey, until I pretended to be angry, hit it two or three it quietly ran home. It will not only send me to school, also like and I together race, run very quickly, sometimes, I fell a journey. At ordinary times, it looks very timid, but saw the stranger, but do not break again fierce with his eyes wide open to tight stared at the stranger's every move, the key when still can call out,
It was a clever and loyal dog!
When I returned home from school, can be the most happy dog. As long as the dog at home, I'm on my way home from school at the door and a long way from home can always see the dog at the door waiting for me. It saw me, he would shook tail to me here, then shot in my people after the previous bouncing around. So clever dog can not likable?
I'm hoping to put the dog to keep fat in vain, because it is really cute.
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我喜欢的小动物是一只小狗,它全身长满白色的毛,像一团棉花糖;眼睛是圆溜溜的,像两颗宝石;耳朵是半圆形,鼻子是黑色,尾巴短短的,很可爱。
我给它爱吃的骨头,它会一块一块,一小段一小段地啃。它啃完骨头后,就会汪汪地叫几
声,好像在说:“小主人,谢谢你。”每当我去上学,她总是会送我一段路程,直到我假装生气打它两三下,它才乖乖地跑回家去。它不但会送我去上学,还喜欢和我一起赛跑,跑得十分快,有时,把我落了一段路程。平时,它看起来很胆小,但看见陌生人时,却又不失威猛地睁着双眼紧盯着陌生人的一举一动,关键时还会大声叫,
它真是一只机灵又尽忠职守的小狗啊!
我放学回家时,可算是小狗最开心的时候。只要小狗在家,我在放学回家的路上离家门口还有一段路总可看见小狗在门前等着我。它看见了我,就会摇着尾巴往我这里飞奔而来,然后在我人前人后蹦来蹦去。这么机灵的小狗能不讨人喜欢吗?
我很希望把这只小狗养得白白胖胖,因为它实在太可爱了。
我喜欢猫英语作文一:
My favourite animal is cat. Cats are quiet and polite. They always walk lordly. Cats are cute. They have soft fur. When I touch them, they look comfortable. Cats have big eyes. Some cat's eyes are green, some are blue, and some are grey. Even some cat's two eyes have different colour. Cat's sound is pleasant to listen to. Their sound is soft too. Otherwise, cats can catch mice. They are human's friends.
I love cats very much. Do you like cats?
我喜欢猫英语作文二:
my little kitty has beatuful grey fur,and with white paws and green eyes. She weigh about 2 kilos. She is very quiet and nice, fish is her favourite food. She likes sleep under the sunshine, but never likes the dogs. She does not go out on rainy days, when she is not sleeping she plays with balls. I brush her once a day and take her go for walks quite often. I am so happy with my little kitty.
我喜欢猫英语作文三:
Several days ago, Mother brought home a little cat。 I gave her a nice name "Mimi"。
She is black all over except her: four feet and a small nose。 There is also a white bib on her chest。 Can you imagine what she looks like?
Every morning she gets up the earliest。 Then she always climbs up my bed and wakes me up。 When we sit at table having our meal, she often runs under the table and even climbs onto our knees, it seems as if she was saying, "Let me join you。 I want something to eat。"
【英语作文】
I like small animals there are many, such as;Lively and lovely little rabbit, gentle little cat, freedom, happy little bird...But my favorite is a loyal dog.
My dog name is doug, it will be bright eyes, long ears stand up, he is very fierce, we are good friends, long I nothing to play with doug, on one occasion, I heard my doug calling, I hurried past, turned out to be sent to sugar, my house will guard doug, I'm very happy.
On another occasion, my mother and I are in the evening to eat the steamed stuffed bun, quickly ran over to the doug, would like to say to leave some for me, my mother and I gave it to doug was with relish to eat delicious steamed stuffed bun.The meal over, we also give doug had a very interesting bath, him very clean after washing, we give doug washes the bath to go to watch TV, doug is really funny, rolled in the ground, or else how can call doug, and then we spent a happy night.
You have what animal, introduce, small animals is a good friend to us all, we need to protect small animals, will not harm them.
【译文】
我喜欢的小动物有很多,如;活泼可爱的小兔、温和的小猫、自由快活的小鸟……可是我最喜欢的是忠诚的小狗。
我家的小狗叫豆豆,它长着会发亮的眼睛,长着竖起来的耳朵,他很凶猛,我们是非长要好的朋友,我没事就跟豆豆玩,有一次,我听到我家豆豆在叫,我就急忙跑过去,原来是送白糖的,我家豆豆会看家了,我非常高兴。
还有一次,晚上我和妈妈正吃包子,豆豆急忙的跑过来了,好想在说给我留点,我和妈妈便给了它,豆豆就津津有味的吃起了香喷喷的包子。吃完饭后我们又给豆豆洗了一次非常有趣的澡,洗完后他身上非常干净,我们给豆豆洗完澡就去看电视了,豆豆可真逗,在地下打滚,要不怎么能叫豆豆呢,然后我们就度过了一个快乐的夜晚。
你们都有什么动物,介绍介绍吧,小动物是我们大家的好朋友,我们要保护小动物,绝不能伤害它们。
古人曾说:“春蚕到死丝方尽,蜡炬成灰泪始干。”这句名言已流传千古。老师您像辛勤的园丁,修剪着我们,老师您像大海里的鲸,我们在你的呵护下成长,您是祖国的栋梁,而我们是祖国的花朵。您是春蚕,悄悄的编织理想的丝线,您是一把大雨伞,而我们就是躲在雨伞下的小动物大雨伞能给小动物遮挡风雨。
打从四年级开始,您就开始教我语文。一见您,高高的个子,任何人见了您都得畏惧三分,我也不例外。可是在学习的过程中和您相处了一段日子,发现您并不是我想象中的那么可怕,而是那么和蔼可亲。作为一名新生的我,上课非常害怕回答问题,生怕回答错。骂我一顿,可是在我有一次,您竟然表扬了我,我很高兴。渐渐的我喜欢上课了。我也在学习上有了很大的进步。又一次写作文,我们有的同学不是跑题,就是字数不够,这是,您和蔼的对我们说,写作文要写出真实感受。我们亲切的对您说:“老师知道了。”老师我想对您说:您是祖国的栋梁,而我们是祖国的花朵。您的丰富的知识,都传给我们,让我们都有知识。您慢慢得变老了,而我们渐渐的长大了。
“一日为师,终身为父。”老师,您就是我们最伟大的母亲。大爱无言,我只想说一句最朴实的话语“老师,谢谢您!”来表达我心中最真诚的感谢和最美好的祝福
四年级:甜蜜521
我最喜欢的动物英语作文1:
My favorite animal is the dog, they not only cute, and very clever, very gentle. Very attractive. My little dog - "full". It is a squirrel dogs, brown body like a cha oil, neck hair round bloom, like a flower. Watery eyes like two glass beads. A thin tail kept shaking, really liked.
"With more than" a see me, have to jump down immediately. I walked over to it, it came to rush, have a smell of my body, its tail happily swaying, I use said touched its little head, it begin to add me by the hand, feel warm. Sometimes when I was eating, it also want to eat, but I didn't give it, it will make some strange sound to attract my attention.
It every time after the shower, I take a towel to embrace it, it seems to be a baby, lay quietly in my hands.
我最喜欢的小动物是小狗,他们不但可爱,而且很乖巧,很驯良。非常讨人喜欢。我的小狗——“满余”。它是一只松鼠狗,褐色的身子像搽了油似的,脖子上的毛向四周盛开,仿佛一朵花。水汪汪的眼睛像两颗玻璃珠。一条细细的小尾巴不停地摇摆着,真惹人喜欢。
“满余”一见到我,立刻又蹦有跳的。我走到它跟前,它扑来扑去的,有嗅嗅我的身子,高兴地把尾巴摇来摇去,我用说摸了摸它的小脑袋,它昂起头来添我的手,感觉暖暖的。有时我在吃东西的时候,它也想吃,但我没给它,它就会发出一些奇怪的声音来吸引我的注意。
它每次洗完澡后,都是我拿着毛巾去抱住它,它好像一个小宝宝,静静地躺在我的手里。
我最喜欢的动物英语作文2:
In the animal world, I most like the cheetah.
The cheetah's really brave. It's flat and smooth, short ears. Two eyes like two, twinkle. There are two prominent muscle in on either side of the face, white, with small black spots, bead point of steel needle of a root beard. There is a a black spots. In addition to the belly is white, the remaining parts of the hair is golden. Its streamline, the whole body presents for sprinting. Its limbs is very rich, full of flexibility. Cheetah's paw is straight, can firmly in the ground, change the running direction. And it is the long tail, can have the effect of acceleration while on the run.
The running speed of cheetah is very surprising, speed is about 130 kilometers per hour, with fast on the highway running car.
But, its endurance is poor, high speed running is limited to a few seconds, so has been hailed as a sprint champion.
Cheetahs hunting is also very interesting. When it found that the deer would be around to look at the first, and see what the intruder. If not, it is with lightning speed to recover to the prey. Easily catch later, it will pull the prey to the grass, enjoy the meal. If the prey in a tree, it jump into the tree to catch the prey, big eat a meal.
The cheetah is really a lovable animals! But, now is trying to catch some criminals for their own interests cheetah, continue like this, will destroy the cheetah. Please act to protect it together.
在动物世界里,我最喜欢猎豹了。
猎豹长得真威猛。它的头平而滑,耳朵短短的。两只眼睛像铜铃一般,炯炯有神。脸的两边有两块突出的肌肉,白白的,上面有一粒粒小黑点,点上有一根根钢针般的胡须。身上有一个一个黑色的斑点。除了肚皮是白色的,其余部位的毛都是金黄色的。它的整个身躯呈现流线形,适合急速奔跑。它的四肢非常发达,富有弹性。猎豹的爪子比较直,能牢牢地巴住地面,改变奔跑方向。而它的那条长长的尾巴,在奔跑时能起到加速的作用呢。
猎豹的奔跑速度很是惊人,每小时的速度大约有130千米,跟高速公路上飞速奔跑的车子差不多。
但是,它的耐力差,高速奔跑只限于几秒钟,所以被誉为短跑冠军。
猎豹捕食也很有意思。当它发现鹿时,先会向四周观察一下,看看有什么不速之客。如果没有,它就以闪电般的速度向猎物追去。轻而易举地捉住之后,它就把猎物拖到草丛中,美美地饱餐一顿。如果猎物在树上,它就跳到树上把猎物给逮住,大吃一顿。
猎豹真是一种讨人喜欢的动物啊!可是,现在有些不法分子为了自身的利益在大肆抓捕猎豹,再这样下去,猎豹会灭绝的。请大家行动起来,一起来保护它吧。
我最喜欢的动物英语作文3:
I have a dog. It is my favourite animal. His name is Beibei. His name and my name are the same. I like Beibei very much. He is only one year old now. He is very small. He is black and white. And he has one sister. She is yellow and white. His mother is white. His father is black. It is very clever. And it is very lovely. So I like him. He has a very small nose, two eyes and two small ears. He has a small mouth, too. He has four legs and a small face. He loves meat very much. There is a bowl near his house. There is always some bones or pork in it. And it is always very clean. His house is very beautiful. The door is red. And there are two windows in the wall. The wall is white and pink. There is a lock in the door. The lock is yellow. It is very nice. Beibei loves his house very much. He usually sleeps and rests in helpful. I think so, too 。
我有一只狗。它是我最喜欢的动物。他的名字叫贝贝。他的名字和我的名字都是相同的。我喜欢贝贝非常多。他现在才一岁。他是非常小的。他是黑色和白色。和他有一个妹妹。她是黄色和白色的。他的母亲是白人。他的父亲是黑人。这是非常聪明的。而且它非常可爱。所以我喜欢他。他有一个非常小的鼻子,两只眼睛和两只小小的耳朵。他有一张小嘴巴,太。他有四条腿和一个小的脸。他非常喜欢肉。他爱我,我也这么认为。
我最喜欢的动物英语作文4:
Most kids like animals. Girls like cats, and boys like dogs. However, my favorite animal is the horse. The horses are strong, not like the tame cats or puppy dogs. They look wild and hard to get close. Yet, they will be very timid and friendly after they get to know you. Horses remember the way home. They are also faithful to their masters. They even understand what you are trying to tell them. I've heard many stories about how a horse saved his master's life. That's also the reason why I love horses. They never betray you.
大多数孩子喜欢动物。女孩喜欢猫,和男孩喜欢狗。然而,我最喜欢的动物是马。马是强大的,不像猫或狗温顺的小狗。他们看起来野生和难以接近。然而,他们会很胆小,友好在他们了解你。马记得回家的路。他们也对他们的主人忠心耿耿。他们甚至理解您想要告诉他们。我听说过很多故事一匹马救了他的主人的生活。这也是为什么我爱马。他们从不背叛你。
我最喜欢的动物英语作文5:
1.我的宠物是
一条可爱的狗。它的名字是"点点" 。因为有很多黑的圆圈在它的皮肤上。"点点" 是非常友好的。许多孩子喜欢和它玩。他的喜爱食物是肉骨头。 他的喜爱玩具是玩偶。" 点点" 喜欢非常跑。它跑得非常快速并且它有一个女朋友。它的名字"娜娜" 。它的皮肤也有很多黑圈子。我非常喜欢我的宠物。这是一只好宠物!!
My pet is a lovely dog.Its name is "dian dian".because there are a lot of black circle on its skin.the "dian dian" is very friendly.Many childen like play with him.His favourite food is meat bones. His favourite toy is a doll. 'dian dian ' likes to run very much.It can run very fast and it has a girl friend.its name "na na".there are a lot of black circle on its skin,too.I like my pet very much.It is a good pet!!
2.我有两只小猫。
他们非常漂亮。一只是黄色的。另一只是白色的。他们非常可爱。黄色的小猫很调皮。他经常到处跑。他最喜欢的游戏是玩球、绳子和石头。而白色的小猫非常温和。她喜欢洗她的脸。并且她不喜欢和人玩。她经常跳上我的膝盖。我喜欢给她洗澡。
噢,我的小猫为我带来了很多愉快。我们是非常好的朋友。我爱他们。
I have got two baby cats. they are very beautiful. One is yellow. the other is white. they are very lovely. the yellow cat is very naughty. He likes to play with people. He often runs here and there. His favourite game is playing with balls, ropes and stones. But the white cat is very gentle. She likes to wash her face. And she doesn′t like to play with people. She often jumps onto my knees. I like to give her a bath.
Oh, my baby cats bring me much happiness. We are very good friends. I love them.
[小动物英语作文范文精选]:
关键词: 中年级 习作指导 六个善于
中年级是小学作文的起步阶段,学生刚刚从低年级的写话迈入习作的门槛,于是对作文产生了畏惧心理,感觉无从下手,无话可说。要扫除这种写作障碍,就需要引导学生有顺序地观察,有目的地积累,有创造地想象,有情感地抒发,把握结构善显层次,抓住中心善表情感,使习作更上一层楼。
一、激趣导入,善学范文
在学习例文的时候,充分调动学生的眼、耳、口、鼻等五官,通过看、听、尝、闻等方式激发学生学习例文的兴趣,从而使学生能快乐地学习例文。
1.视频切入。在教学《动物名片》这节课中,我课前搜集了有关动物的视频录像,一上课就说给同学介绍几个好朋友,一边让学生看视频,一边用讲故事的方法讲出例文中的内容,学生不时地说:“这个很可爱,我喜欢那个小动物!”从而与例文产生共鸣。
2.有声录音。在教学《小闹钟的自述》时,我课前提前录好了例文的内容,一上课,我就告诉同学们,今天我们来听一个故事,于是放出图片,配上音乐,学生很容易就发现这就是课本中的例文,从而对例文产生兴趣,学习效果就更好了。
3.亲近大自然。教学《山坡上》这篇习作时,当时正好是秋天,于是我带着学生一起去校园里走一走、逛一逛、写一写秋天的校园。让学生在快乐中观察发现,乐于写作。
4.实物展示。碰到一些写水果、文具等事物的习作时,我把这些静物带到课堂中,拉近课堂与习作的距离,激发学生的兴趣,也为快乐习作增添了一份生机。
二、观察有序,善于发现
陶行知先生曾说:“要解放学生的眼睛,使他们能看,引导学生看清事实,就能活跃学生的思想。”对三年级的小学生来说,只有亲身体验,才能获得最真实、最深刻的内容和资料,写出的文章也比较具体、生动。当然,三年级毕竟是习作的起步阶段,因此,在指导观察时应多收少放。教师应把握大致的观察顺序,让学生的习作不至于杂乱无章,东一句,西一句,偏差太大。与此同时,也让学生选择自己感兴趣的一小部分详细写,这样既有了“收”的顺序,又有了“放”的详略。
1.写景物时,让学生按照一定的顺序看,从左到右,从近到远,等等。例如,在看的同时,让学生交流你看到秋天的校园到底有什么变化,学生最容易发现的肯定是植物,哪些植物有季节特点?哪些没有?让学生小组交流。当然秋天的校园中不仅有植物,我让学生注意那些更细小的事物,比如草丛中的西瓜虫、蚂蚁等小动物,使文章更添一份生气。
2.写人物、状物时一般让学生遵从整理到局部,从上到下的观察顺序。在教学《自画像》这篇习作时,我让学生当天带好镜子,一边对照着镜子,一边从整体的脸型入手,从头发、眉毛、眼睛、鼻子、嘴巴入手写好五官。在教学《台灯的自述》时,我带来一个卡通的台灯,让学生从整体形状着手,再按先是最上面的灯罩,接着是灯柱,再到底托的顺序进行集体观察,把握整体观察顺序。
当然在观察的同时,交流是最好的指导和反馈。可以让表达能力好的学生带动语言组织能力稍差的同学进行说话练习,从而产生习作的火花,为动笔习作打好基础。
三、积累素材,善选文字
《语文课程标准》指出:“阅读是搜集处理信息、认识世界、发展思维、获得审美体验的重要途径。”除了指导学生积累有关课文中的妙词佳句以外,我还注重引导学生进行课外阅读,做读书笔记,完成《艺海拾贝》的收集和整理。
课前我也会准备学生可能会用到的有关好词好句,让学生适时选用。或者学生在写的同时一发现有什么字词不会写我就把它写在黑板上,一方面教会了学生不会写的字,另一方面也可以给其他同学借鉴,有时学生想到的词语比我事先准备好的都要精彩且贴切。一堂习作课下来,经常都是满满一黑板的词句短语。
四、启发想象,善用修辞
修改版“大纲”明确指出“要鼓励学生写想象中的事物,激发他们展开想象,幻想,发挥自己的创造性。”小学生的想象富有创造力,常常能产生许多生动的联想,让老师啧啧称奇。
1.修辞手法的运用。在写小动物的习作时,我让学生明白,简单的一幅图,小作者也能写出生动有趣的介绍,为什么呢?学生很容易就答出,作者运用了拟人、比喻等修辞手法,从而把小动物介绍得生动形象。课堂中,让学生说一说拟人句、比喻句,比一比谁最有创造性的思维。在交流的同时,也能启发其他同学的思维。
2.大胆的思维发散。在学写看图作文和童话故事时,更加需要学生有丰富大胆的想象,这里的想象不仅仅是比喻、拟人的运用,更多的是思维的发散。教学时,教师要用生动的语言描述事物,丰富学生的表象,训练学生通过想象解决问题,使学生的思维活动富有想象力。比如看图作文《孙小圣到此一游》中,仅仅一幅图,你能写出什么呢?我启发学生想象孙小圣的动作、神态、语言,学生很容易想到猴子的特性,金鸡独立、倒挂金钩、抓耳挠腮等,以及孙小圣和胖胖熊的争辩。学生在交流中,集思广益,文章内容就比较丰富多样。
五、讲究层次,善表中心
中年级的学生刚刚从写话过渡到写文章,常常会发生从头到尾只有一大段的情况,使文章没有重点,读者看着吃力。因此,让学生掌握常见的“总分”“总分总”结构特点还是很有必要的。教学中,我也常常运用反馈的手法,让学生知道分段写作的重要性。
猫咪宝贝
河南省宜阳县
实验小学六(1)班
田醒
我非常喜欢小动物,所以妈妈给我买了一只小猫。我高兴极了,每天都在院子里陪它玩耍。我每周都要给猫咪洗澡,精心地照顾它,尽管这样,它还是经常把身上玩得脏兮兮的。我教训它,它冲我“喵喵”地叫,好像在顶嘴,又好像在和我交流。淘气的猫咪,真拿它没办法。
妈妈带着猫咪去奶奶家捉老鼠,一连几天没有回来,我非常牵挂它。几天之后,猫咪居然自己跑回来了!我抱起它,心想,以后我不让它再离开我了,我要做它的保护神。
(辅导老师:李灵芳)
小小仓鼠
河南省新安县
紫苑小学三(1)班
吕百合
我养的那只小仓鼠,身体圆滚滚的,长着雪白雪白的毛,像一个小雪球,可爱极了。
尽管妈妈不喜欢在家里养动物,但见我把仓鼠当成心肝宝贝,她只好同意了。每天上学时我都非常牵挂它,放学回到家就喂它食物,给它洗澡,细心地照顾它。它很淘气,时常偷偷从笼子里跑出来。有一次,我看见地上有一个雪白的小绒球,以为是我的毛绒玩具掉在地上了,轻轻一抓,哎呀!原来是我的小仓鼠!爸爸妈妈在一旁哈哈大笑。
小仓鼠是我的好朋友,我喜欢和它一起玩,与它交流我的喜怒哀乐,在它遇到危险的时候我就充当它的保护神,保护它不受到伤害。
(辅导老师:王雪玲)
联词: 习惯 重新 所以 痛苦 事半功倍 瘾 坚持 笑容
良好习惯
河南省内乡县
师岗中心小学六(4)班
吕颖异
我有一个好习惯,就是从三年级开始每天坚持写日记。
起初,我只是觉得写日记好玩儿,坚持了几年,我现在写日记简直写上瘾了,若哪天没写,夜里就睡不着,感觉非常痛苦。
写日记使我的思维很敏捷,语言组织能力也增强了,写起作文来很轻松,不用先打草稿,然后重新抄在作文本上,所以 事半功倍!每当我的作文在报纸上发表,老师在课堂上表扬我,我就会心里乐开了花,露出甜甜的笑容。
(辅导老师:常飒)
联词: 运动 疲惫 伙伴 汗水 鼓励 安慰 雀跃 拉拉队
运动场上
河南省南阳市
第十一小学四(2)班
高倩儿
听说学校要开运动会了,我和伙伴们兴奋得一蹦三尺高。我们组织了一个拉拉队,准备给比赛的同学加油。
在500米跑比赛时,运动员们疲惫极了。拉拉队拼命给他们加油,鼓励他们坚持到底。最后,我班得了第三名,大家很沮丧,感觉汗水白流了。拉拉队队长安慰道:“没事,只要努力了就好。”