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开篇：写作不仅是一种记录，更是一种创造，它让我们能够捕捉那些稍纵即逝的灵感，将它们永久地定格在纸上。下面是小编精心整理的12篇英语作文模板，希望这些内容能成为您创作过程中的良师益友，陪伴您不断探索和进步。
The computer is widely used in education，and some people think teachers do not play important roles in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
In this period of communication, computer has been used in all kinds of fields widely, and plays a particular role in our lives. Especially computer has become more and more important in educational field, therefore dozens of people considered teachers could be replaced computers that will go with the current of the times. The above point is certainly wrong; this essay will outline three reasons.
The main reason is that people's brain better than computer. Firstly, people design all kinds of computer's programs. Secondly, computer doesn't have logistic ideation. Computer only can defend on that designer inputted computer's programs to judge a question's right or wrong. In other words, computer can't defend on thinking that computer independently analyzes a question's right or wrong. In case, designer inputted programs that are wrong. Computer output the result that also will be wrong. If this kind of problem happened in classroom, students would be infused plenty of wrong information.
Another reason is that computer's programs designed software of education that could be amended difficultly. If software of education of bugs were found, commonly these of problems couldn't be solved in the classroom. The software was amended that means total of program were corrected, not only parts of program were inserted or amended usually.
Last but not the least reason is computer is mechanical, it couldn't be suited all kinds of students and different demands. As students' intellect is different, same of software couldn't base on every status of student to set a perfect project.
In conclusion, computers couldn't instead of the position of teachers in the classroom, however computer is an absolutely good helper for teacher.
中考英语作文模板：Wild animals
Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so the protection means wasting resource. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowhere in the world has the issue of wild animals been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays, the habitat of wild animals is being destroyed, but many people think that it to be insignificant to protect these wild animals. The above point is absolutely wrong, this essay will outline three reasons.
The main reason is that people should not master existent right of animals. Not only people but also wild animals have the right to live. More and more wild animals are rapidly disappearing from this globe, it couldn't be divided with that natural environment was destroyed. It is unfair to wild animals whose existent rights are being ignored.
Another reason is that biologic diversity should be protected. In the future, it will be terrible and alone definitely if only people survive on this globe. Also, the variety of species has an important scientific value. For instance, invention of radar was based on ultrasonic of bat.
Last but not the least reason is many wild animals are not protected, it means the natural balance will be broken, people will face challenges and problems. People destroyed environment of nature, resulting a smaller in habitat for wild animals. Also, the problems of environment have already affected oneself of people. If people couldn't amend current status, it will be the biggest bale of them.
In conclusion, people ought to pay out plenty of money for improving existent environment of wild animals. This behavior doesn't have the meaning of alms. On the contrary, it just means atonement.
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic
varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude
as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.
Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no
doubt that ___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一
或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more
_______, the more ________.
（2）利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. G英语作文模板：说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个
角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）
1． 说明事物现状
2． 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）
3． 你对现状（或前景）的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.
Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(A的优点之一). Besides -------------------（A的优点之二）.
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of
the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点)．
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the
negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法)．
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we
1图表作文框架
As is shown / indicated / illustrated by the figure / percentage in the table( graph / picture / pie / chart), 作文题目的议题 has been on rise/ decrease (goes up / increases / drops / decreases), significantly / dramatically / steadily rising / decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in ____. From the sharp / marked decline / rise in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____. On the one hand, ______. On the other hand, ______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, _______ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and
well-grounded.
2书信作文模板
Your address
Month， Date， year
Receiver's address
Dear …，
I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____.
……
I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience / I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.
Best regards for your health and success.
Sincerely yours，
X X X
3话题作文
Nowadays， there are more and more in . It is estimated that ___. Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.
The first one is ______. Besides，_____. The third one is _____. To sum up， the main cause of it is due to _____. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing，_____. For another thing， _____. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____.
4对比观点作文
(1) 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1. 有一些人认为…
2. 另一些人认为…
3. 我的看法…
The topic of ① (主题) is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ② (支持A的理由一) What is more, ③ (理由二) . Moreover, ④ (理由三) .
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly, (支持B的理由一) . Secondly (besides),⑥ (理由二) . Thirdly (finally),⑦ (理由三) .
From my point of view, I think ⑧ (我的观点) . The reason is that ⑨ (原因) . As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
(2) 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ① (观点一) . For example, they think ② (举例说明) .And it will bring them ③ (为他们带来的好处) .
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④ (我不同意该看法的理由一) . For another thing, ⑤ (反对的理由之二) .
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥ (我对文章所讨论主题的看法)
5阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述.
1. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义.
2. 分析并举例使其更充实.
The good old proverb (名言或谚语) reminds us that (释义) . Indeed, we can learn many things form it.
First of all, (理由一) . For example, (举例说明) . Secondly, (理由二) . Another case is that (举例说明) . Furthermore , (理由三) .
6解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
1. 问题现状
2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
In recent days, we have to face I problem A , which is becoming more and more serious. First, (说明A的现状) .Second, (举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, (解决方法一) . For another (解决方法二) . Finally, (解决方法三) .
Personally, I believe that (我的解决方法) . Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because (带来的好处) .
7说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)
1. 说明事物现状
2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First (A的优点之一) . Besides (A的优点之二) .
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that (A的第一个缺点) .To make matters worse, (A的第二个缺点) .
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to (我的看法) .
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, (对前景的预测).)
8现象说明文
Recently,what amazes us most is___________.
It is ture that__________.
There are many reasons explaining_______.
The main reason is____________________.
As a result_______________.
Considering all there,________________.
For one thing__________,for another________.
In Conclusion____________________.
范文：一种事物或现象(负面意义倾向)
关于A的话题,早已引起了广泛的社会关注。如今在电视、报纸、日常生活的很多角落，都有越来越多的关于A的议论。
给A一个精确恒定的定义并非易事，因为它的概念涉及了科学、人性、思想、经济、社会、自然等广阔的领域。一般而言，我们可以这样描述A…
A能成为公众关注的焦点，主要是由于它对个人、集体乃至整个世界都有着不容忽视的不良影响。
认真分析后我们可以看到，A对社会/世界 /健康的不利有很多。首先，从最直观的角度来看，A的出现直接损害了(这里加入一句针对性的话，如人类的身体健康和环境的平衡) 。(举例)。其次，从更深一层次上讲，它为人类的精神文明蒙上了一层阴影。更可怕的是，由于A所产生微小利益，却促成了许多可悲的人们为其忘乎所以，破坏了人类生存的法则和空间。
事实上，A的出现是社会发展和人类进步的产物，A所带来的危害是人类进化过程中付出的代价。同时，A的产生来源于部分人们的自私和趋利性，他们看到的是肤浅和片面的利益，而从未从整个全局和人类整体的利益出发去认识和分析它。这使得A始终挥之不去。对此，我奉劝他们，跳出狭小的角落，用长远和全局的眼光去重新审视A。
而如今，我们已深受其害，要想消除它的危害，我们必须从根源上杜绝它的产生，我们每一个人都应给予A高度的重视，用系统的和科学的方法去解决，唯有这样，避免它带来更多损失，我们人类前进的脚步才会更加平稳，更加欢快的迈向辉煌的明天。
One object or phenomenon (negative significance inclination.)
A has attracted extensive attention of the society. Nowadays, increasingly more argumentations about A can be found in TV programs, newspapers, ugogo and marry aspects of our everyday life.
Since its concept covers vast fields, such as science, humanity, ideology, economy, society and nature, A is difficult to be defined, precisely and fixedly. Generally speaking ,we can describe A as follows:…
A’s status as the focus of public concern mainly results from its in negligible but harmful influence on individuals, collective, and even the whole world. It seems to have a strange power to drive some individuals or organizations to act wrongly. The essence of these wrong actions is:
(1) to gain personal, short-term and partial individual interest at the expense of damaging others’ long-term and overall interest;
(2) to adopt improper means to win more rewards with less input.
Situating under the shadow of A, individuals /organizations and violate natural law merely to obtain temporary, or even illusory interests. However, the result may turn out to be loss of really important and valuable resource or ability.
We must keep highly alert of the problems evoked by A, because once the harmful influence accumulates to a certain degree and then spread, it will surely threaten the development of the whole society.
Though with various reasons and forms, from the perspective of the essence, the problems brought by A originates from the fundamental principle of human ideology and material production. Thus, we should seek the solutions through setting foot on this principle.
Due to the depth and width of A’s harmful influence, we should draft our we should draft our solution scientifically and systematically on the basis of deep analysis of A problem. We must acquire our power from technology, management, law and culture, effectively eliminate the shadow of A, and ensures ourselves a bright future.
9议论文框架
(1) 不同观点列举型( 选择型 )
There is a widespread concern over the issue that 作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that 观点一 . In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一 .Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二 . So it goes without saying that ___观点一 .
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二 . In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一 . On the other hand, ____原因二 . Therefore, there is no doubt that 观点二 .
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二 . It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
(2)利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in 题目议题 . Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, 优点一 . And secondly 优点二 .
Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一 . In addition, 缺点二 .
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the 讨论议题 .
( 3 ) 答题性议论文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that) 作文题目 .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.
As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __途径一 . In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is 途径二 .
Above all, to solve the problem of 作文题目 , we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, 方法 .
( 4 ) 谚语警句性议论文
It is well know to us that the proverb: " 谚语 " has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义 . The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically )
A case in point is 例子一 . Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb 谚语 .
With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..
ate the shadow of A, and ensures ourselves a bright future.
10实用性写作(申请信)
Your address(自己的地址，由小到大)
Month, Date, year(书信时间)
Receiver's address(收信人地址，由小到大)
Dear ...,
I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in .... And I would like to write a letter to tell you that.../ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising...
I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, .... On the other hand, .... I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.
I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.
Best regards for your health and success.
模板一：
Dear___________,
I read from today’s newspaper about recent_________and I am writing to extend my deepest condolences.
It broke my heart to__________.I could not believe my eyes when_________,and I am really worried about you and your_________I am crossing my fingers for you now in hope that________.
I can imagine how difficult it must be for you , and I want to let you know that you have my full support.We are donating money and necessities to______.Please let me know if I can help you with anything else.
I feel extrenely sorry for the tragedy,and I am convinced that you will overcome the difficulty and embrace a better life.
Sincere yours,
____________
模板二：
Dear James, In today’s newspaper, I read about the recent events in your town and I am writing to extend my deepest condolences.
It broke my heart to see all those pictures of those whose homes have been destroyed in the tragic hurricane. I couldn’t believe my eyes when I saw a little girl crying on the roof of her house asking for help. I am really worried about you and your family, and all your friends there. I am crossing my fingers for you now in hopes that you are all safe and sound.
I can only imagine how difficult this time must be for you, and I want to extend to you my unwavering support. Our government and many nongovernmental organizations are initiating various campaigns to urge people to donate money and necessary things to send to America. I donated all my allowance that I have been saving for years.
I feel extremely sorry for this tragedy, and I will be looking forward to hearing from you. Please pass my concern on to your parents.
as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases),
significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______
to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it
goes without saying that ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______.
On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is
due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is
responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons
to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.
I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
The average household carbon footprint in China is 2.41 tons of carbon dioxide annually. That's enough to fill half an Olympic swimming pool.
Surprised? Well, here's how you can work to reduce it:
1.Get started by calculating your own carbon footprint. This will give you a starting point from which to begin monitoring your progress. You enter details such as what sort of apartment you live in, your personal energy use and travel habits.
2. Each week, choose one day when you don't eat meat. Meat uses up lots of energy because it takes a long time to produce. Animals produce methane, which is another dangerous greenhouse gas, when they burp and fart.
3. Only buy the amount of food you need and if there are leftovers, get creative. For instance, make them into a soup. Ask to take food home from restaurants if there's some left, but remember to take your own container to avoid using a disposable carton.
我们每一个人负责温室气体排放在我们的日常行为和选择。因此,应对气候变化需要地球上的每个人都的共同努力。
平均每个家庭在中国的碳排放量是2.41吨二氧化碳。足够填充半个奥运游泳池了。
惊讶吗?下面是如何努力去减少这种:
1。开始计算你自己的碳足迹。这将给你一个起点的开始监视你的进步。您输入详细信息,比如什么样的公寓你住在,你的个人能源使用和旅行的习惯。
Different people have different hobbies.For example,someone likes reading,someone likes swimming and someone likes collecting and so on.
I used to read books and draw pictures because by reading books I could learn many funny things.But now I don't like it.I can only learn from books.I couldn't get knowledge from others.I need a change.Traveling is my favorite hobby now.But I can't go traveling a lot.I can visit many different places of interest by traveling.I can learn a lot about people,places and history.It's very interesting.What is your hobby?Let's share each other!
I have many good friends.They all have their hobbies.Ann studies very hard.So her hobby is book reading.Tony loves labour,and his hobby is gardening.He usually plants flowers and trees in his yard.Judy is a quiet girl.She likes knitting.She always knits some sweaters for her dolls.We have different hobbies,but we are good friends.
I love traveling.I have great fun in traveling.
不同的人有不同的爱好。例如,有人喜欢阅读,有人喜欢游泳,有人喜欢收集等等。
我用来读书和画画,因为通过阅读我可以学到很多有趣的东西。但是现在我不喜欢它。我只能从书中学习。我不能从其他人那里获得知识。我需要一个改变。现在旅行是我最喜欢的爱好。但是我不能去旅行。感兴趣的可以去很多不同的地方旅行。我可以学到很多关于人、地点和历史。这是非常有趣的。你的爱好是什么?让我们彼此分享!
我有很多好朋友。他们都有他们的爱好。安学习很努力。所以,她的爱好是读书。托尼喜欢劳动,他的爱好是园艺。他通常在他的院子里植物花和树木。朱蒂是一个安静的女孩。她喜欢织毛衣。她总是一些毛衣织她的娃娃。我们有不同的爱好,但我们是好朋友。
我爱旅行。我在旅行非常有趣。
1、
有人问了，“我没有记住名言，怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”，很好办：编!
原理：我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的，包括我们欣赏的文章也是，所以尽管编，但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?
经典句型：
a proberb says, “ you are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)
it goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)
更多经典句型：as everyone knows, no one can deny that…
2.
原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的，可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一，但编无妨，只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型：
according to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起来这个数字文邹邹的，其实都是编造出来的，下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造： travel by bike
根据最近的一项统计调查显示，85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
youth
根据最近的一项统计调查显示，在某个大学，学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
five-day work week better than six-day work?
根据最近的一项统计调查显示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
3.
让老师产生一种你英语学得很好的错觉 这样高分作文更不是问题
As time goes by,.....随着时间的流逝
There is no doubt that...毫无疑问...
As far as I'm concerned, I think....就我而言，我认为...
It is said that...据说...
Two heads are better than one.三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮。
It is ...that...强调句
It is important for sb to do sth.
there be句型
Compared with A, B is more ...与A相比，B更...
in my opinion 在我看来
It is high time that we did sth.是我们做..的时候了。
Only in this way, can wei solve this problem properly.只有这样我们才能妥善解决这个问题。
sth is so...that...如此..以至于..
not only ...,but also...不仅...而且...
To be honest To tell the truth 老实说来
too..to 太..以至于不能..
On one hand,..on the other hand,..一方面..另一方面..
附注：
Recently, the problem of … has aroused people's concern. 最近,……问题已引起人们的关注.
The Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.
Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.
如今，(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.
It is commonly believed that … / It is a common belief that … 人们一般认为……
Many people insist that … 很多人坚持认为……
With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…
随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为……
A lot of people seem to think that … 很多人似乎认为……
引出不同观点:
People's views on … vary from person to person. Some hold that …. However, others believe that….人们对……的观点因人而异.有些人认为……，然而其他人却认为……
People may have different opinions on …人们对……可能会有不同的见解.
Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.
教育类模板1：
As the title indicates, “…… ”, the set of pictures apparently reminds us that…… . It is discernable that…… .
The drawing virtually reminds its audience a widespread phenomenon existing negatively in the area of basic education in China, that is,…… . That is to say,…… . Such a practice is very harmful in terms of the following aspects.Firstly,…… . Secondly,…… . Last but not the least,…… .
In my point of view,…… , but it is only part of the picture. On the other hand,…… . Therefore, it is an urgent task to…… . As children are the future of our nation, creating a good environment for their upbringing means creating a bright and promising future for our nation.
教育类模板2：
The picture shows…… . symbolizes…… . As is quoted in the picture,…… .
It apparently mirrors an increasingly common social phenomenon in China— in contrast with…… . One the one hand， the problem partially attributes to…… . Sometimes…… . On the other hand,…… . For example,…… ,while…… .
In my opinion, the government needs to launch a reform in the education system with measures that can show immediate effect. proves to be most beneficial to students. Further, a large-scale reform in the macroeconomic level to is the basic solution of this issue.
教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。
问：“哪十字？”
“结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点！”
结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be? him one day!
要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。
逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示总结的）。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。
亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good- looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
只要把这十个字都搞定了，那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定！
Presently, a new lifestyle called low carbon life is spreading every corner of our country. The concepts of low carbon are low energy and no waste. It is such a significant project that I can’t wait to present my ideas on how to promote it.
On the first place, a no-car day is supposed to set up every week in our school. Because cars not only cause serious air pollution but also waste energy. On no-car day, neither students nor teachers are allowed to drive to school. Meanwhile, just walk, jump, cycle or run. Use our legs and enjoy the fun.
On the second place, we had best not use plastic bags any more. No one can stand the “white pollution”. So, it is wise to use bags which can be reused again and again.
Finally, one thing that we should keep in mind: every big thing comes from the subtle. Therefore, as students, we ought to turn out the lights the moment we leave, turn off the tap in time, and reuse our textbook and so on.
All in all, it weighs greatly for all of us to put the low carbon lifestyle into practice. Just set our mind to these: no-car day, no plastic bags, and no waste. Let’s do it now.
目前,新的生活方式称为低碳生活是传播的每一个角落,我们的国家。低碳的概念是低能量没有垃圾。如此重大的一个项目,我等不及要提出我的看法关于如何促进它。
首先,应该一天应该是建立在我们学校每星期。因为汽车不仅造成严重的空气污染,而且浪费能源。应该一天,学生和老师都不允许开车上学。与此同时,刚刚走,跳,周期或运行。用我们的腿和享受乐趣。
第二,我们最好不要使用塑料袋。没有人能忍受“白色污染”。所以,明智的做法是使用袋子可以一次又一次的被重用。
最后,有一件事,我们应该记住:每一件大事来自微妙。因此,作为学生,我们应该关灯此刻我们离开,及时关水龙头,重用我们的课本,等等。
总之,它的重量大大我们把低碳生活方式付诸实践。把我们的思想这些:应该,没有塑料袋,没有浪费。让我们现在就做。
